[Vision2020] careless editing

Joan Opyr joanopyr at earthlink.net
Wed Nov 2 16:31:05 PST 2005


Dear Visionaries,

I absolutely HATE grammatical errors, particularly when they appear in 
my own posts.  So, please, allow me to correct the PS to the piece I 
just sent to 2020:

PS: The last time I checked, only Russia and China imprisoned a greater 
percentage of their citizens than the United States, but rumor has it 
that we've now surpassed Russia.  Not that it matters or anything.  I 
was just thinking about it in the context of asking a question like, 
"What just society does something like this?"  But I don't approve of 
asking these kinds of questions, do I?  Thinking too hard makes me a 
wet blanket at parties.  Would you pass me a Bud Light, Sunil?  Oh, and 
a copy of People magazine.  I'm really, really hoping that Jennifer 
Aniston and Vince Vaughn get together.  That'll show that adulterous 
Brad Pitt and that slut, Angelina Jolie!  (Sorry, Carl.)

Ah, that feels better.  Thank you for your indulgence.

Joan Opyr/Auntie Establishment
www.joanopyr.com
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